Creating Timelines for Your Story

Yes, yes.  I remember Ms. Hashman’s third grade class where we stuck butcher block paper all around the room in an effort to create a timeline of all human events.  I was totally lost.  Time is a difficult concept for little people.  Heck, given the amount of missed appointments, late meetings, and speeches that drag on forever, seems like time is a difficult concept for everyone.  So why bother tracking it?  And why, especially, track time in a piece of fiction?

Great question.  To me, time is the anchor or plausibility check for my work.  It keeps my characters in appropriate frames of mind and levels of maturity for the story I’m working on.

For example, in “Faith on the Rocks,” Daisy is in  her early fifties, complete with menopausal symptoms such as hot flashes and insecurities.  As she goes through more books, I don’t want her stuck in that yuck time of life forever.  Can you imagine?  How cruel!

Kitty, on the other hand, is living in her mid-twenties with “Faith.” I want her growing up more and becoming a wiser, successful woman (maybe even a published author).  That can’t happen without the passage of time and the life lessons learned as a result.

Now, I understand there are several good timeline software packages out in the world, but I’ve always enjoyed the Keep It Smart and Simple principle (notice the nod to Valentines Day here – K.I.S.S.).  I need two ways to record time, but have only recently been building the second one.

TIMELINE ONE: EMPTY BLOCK CALENDAR

Original calendar notes of events for "Faith on the Rocks"

Original calendar of events for “Faith on the Rocks”

This is a great way to map your story so that it isn’t too long or cumbersome to get done.  Learned about this in an RMFW Gold Conference session a few years ago, with author Peggy Waide.  This timeline can be either a calendar or a map of events in your story.  I use a 7 x 5 chart printed landscape on an 8.5″ x 11″ paper.  I saved this map as a blank in my writing notes because when it comes time to mapping my story, I like to work by hand.  I print the calendar a couple of times if necessary, then jot in plot notes.  This way, I can tell at a glance whether the story works or not.

This came in particularly handy when an editor said my story started in September, but we were suddenly nearing Halloween in another part.  I sent her the “calendar”of events, and she was satisfied.  We tweaked a line or two and the novel is good to go.

Ms. Waide’s historical romances take place over longer periods than a month so she uses the blocks to help jog her into plot twists.  End of a “week”? Make something “up the stakes” in your story!  Very cool thought process.  If you ever get a chance to hear Ms. Waide talk, be sure to take it.  She is so full of energy and the spirit of fun, you’ll be sure to learn a lot and have a great time.  But now, back to timelines.

TIMELINE TWO: THE EXCEL SPREADSHEET METHOD

In the final review of my book and beginning of “Sliced Vegetarian,” questions kept popping into my head about what was going on in Daisy’s life, but outside the story area.  I wondered how old Gabe was, and Sam Waters, Daisy’s dog park friend.  The biggest questions came around Ginny’s age and when exactly she and Daisy were together at Independence High.  And when did that Colby Stanton incident occur? Hmm.

Notes weren’t particularly helpful, and thinking things through in my own post-menopausal brain weren’t successful.  I turned to a trusty old friend from my marketing days–Excel.

Now don’t go screaming from the room!  Excel is a really cool tool, and for creative writing it needn’t be complicated or scary.  Here’s what I’ve started:

  1. Set up and save the spreadsheet workbook.  Just hit the save and name your work. Easy-peasy.
  2. I added columns for Year, Event, Notes, and Daisy Books where this is referenced.
  3. Other than the year, I knew I would want to wrap text inside the columns, so I selected the columns by clicking on the letter at the top, then found the Format-> Cells menu item and a pop-up menu showed an Alignment page option.  I clicked on that.
  4. In the lower options box on the Alignment page there’s a little check box for “Wrap Text.”  I clicked that, then returned to my spreadsheet.
  5. In the Year column I put in as my first number, Daisy’s birth year — 1959.  This sort of fit with my story, so that became Daisy’s official birth year.  And, because I think Daisy is so full of jokes and silliness, I gave her a birthday of April 1.  Can you see how suddenly it is so much easier to tell what’s going on in her life?  I have a tangible birthdate–even if Donald Trump would have me if he requested her birth certificate. Heh, heh.
  6. Did you know that once you’ve put a number in an Excel cell, you can click and drag on the lower right corner and advancing numbers will flow right under your mouse?  Pretty cool. Daisy aged in a snap.  I even played with making her 100 years old, before I got down to business.
  7. Next I dragged out the column widths on my sheet to a comfortable size for me. Nothing specific, I just eyeballed what a column width with text should be, and left it at that.
  8. Lastly, I went through my “Faith on the Rocks” outlines and notes and put in important “back story” items.  If something was mentioned in this first book, pop! It got a line on my spreadsheet.

You can play with colors and highlights if you have a complex string of novels, and use the Move or Copy function (right-click on the sheet tab) to create timelines for other characters.  What a fun way to “write” without long, time-consuming, notes!

Hope this helps.  How do you track time, either in life or in your stories?

The ARCs Are In–Now What?

I knew they were coming. Had sat watching out the front door for a couple of days.  No delivery person, no delivery person.  Then, Friday afternoon, when all hope for receiving my ARCs had drifted away and I had settled on the idea that I would not receive my Advanced Reader Copies of my book before leaving to visit my daughter and granddaughter for the weekend, I saw the boxes.

Two containers filled with rough copies or “galleys” of my book sat quietly on my front porch.  I might have missed them but for the tiny bit of hope that refused to leave my brain. Yipee!!

So what is an ARC and why is it so exciting?

Faith on the Rocks with a Not For Sale note.

Advance Uncorrected Proof is a copy of your almost ready for prime-time novel

An ARC, or Advance Reader Copy, is the book in its almost-finished-state. Authors can see what the cover looks like first hand, and have one last chance to make small corrections to their story before it goes into mass print.  It’s like the astronauts sitting in the pod that will take them to outer space.  Everything looks ready and you just want to have someone count down already, but the scientists back in home base need to make their final checks before hitting the blast-off button.

And thank goodness for those final checks!  I re-read my book in this ARC or galley form, and  found a couple of typos, a few small errors and then, in chapter 39, there it was–the error I would have been so embarrassed not to catch. Wanna know what that error was?

Okay.

You know how I have a story bible to keep names and characters straight.  Well a bible also helps remind you if you’ve named two separate characters with the same name.  Huge no-no.  Huge.

Well, yours truly did just that.  I have a minor character called Matt Hawkins sprinkled throughout my books (yes, he shows up in more than one story).  I accidentally named another character Matt.  You see, there used to be this boy … Oh, but I digress. That’s a true confession for another time.

Anyway, I named a second minor character Matt.  While I corrected the  first reference, there were four other Matts who should have been Clints on the following pages.  Oops!  My bad.  Big time.

Thank goodness for ARCs. All forty of ’em.

Why did I receive 40 ARCs?  Because authors are supposed to send these out into the world for reviews by famous authors, booksellers, reviewers et al.  They are NOT for family, or friends because, after all, this book thing is a business.  The ARCs are for me to use to promote my first book.

Problem: I don’t know any authors, booksellers or reviewers.  I want to send 40 books out so that people will start to talk about this book, and put it in writing so that the back of my book isn’t all just a blurb about me and what prospective readers will find inside.  Where will I find these advance readers?

I will make my lists today.  First of all, I’ll contact Writer’s Digest.  Perhaps being a subscriber more on than off for thirty years will help.  And then there are a few famous authors who are also members of my own Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers who may give a helping hand to a newbie.  Hometown newspapers in Michigan might pick up my book for a review (especially if I mention I’m coming into town right around release time), and my nephew has a contact that runs a review blog out east.  Half the world swarms into Colorado for ski season, and I’ve generously sprinkled local places of interest in my book, so perhaps that might help.

Do you have any ideas?  I know my “real” job is marketing, but this promoting yourself is a bit of a bear.

BUT,  I have an idea! It’s a contest.

Next week, I’ll try to write a quick mystery.  It will be pretty straight forward, as I’m not feeling particularly tricky this quarter.  If you read the mystery I write, and perhaps encourage your friends to do the same, you could win a copy of my ARC.  Just remember this is not in final polished form, but you can think of it as a limited edition print.  I’ll also be sure to autograph it just for you. Pretty cool, huh?

Here are the contest rules:

  • Read the mystery
  • Solve the main question of Who Dunnit and how you know this (Check out Women’s World–“Solve It Yourself Mystery” for ideas on this)
  • Click the link that takes you to the submission form
  • Be quick!  I can only send an ARC to the first correct submission

This is not a rule, but it would help me a lot if you would send a link to  your friends and librarians about this.  The name of this game is, after all, promotion.  What do you think?  Are you up for receiving your copy of my ARC, or will you wait until June and the real thing?

Have a happy writing day.